(omg you're stalking the kink meme too?? i posted a little thing there a week or two ago and it was my first kink meme fill ever anywhere and i was so proud)
—*clears throat*
but, in all honesty, this was really really good—i kind of hope you're planning to share it with a wider audience at some point, since the world kind of needs more good simon fic like burning.
for "not having a feel" for any of the characters yet, for the most part they sounded pretty "right" to me throughout. the opening confrontation through the door of blackquill's apartment was particularly on-key; his flat responses were so very Blackquill. ""All this shrieking is upsetting Taka" heh. and Athena's great, too.
also, way to make the comic relief sad / stab me in the weak spot / ow. poor gumshoe.
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Date: 2013-12-03 04:39 am (UTC)—*clears throat*
but, in all honesty, this was really really good—i kind of hope you're planning to share it with a wider audience at some point, since the world kind of needs more good simon fic like burning.
for "not having a feel" for any of the characters yet, for the most part they sounded pretty "right" to me throughout. the opening confrontation through the door of blackquill's apartment was particularly on-key; his flat responses were so very Blackquill. ""All this shrieking is upsetting Taka" heh. and Athena's great, too.
also, way to make the comic relief sad / stab me in the weak spot / ow. poor gumshoe.
i am quite pleased you shared this; thank you!